Напишав за Емаил темата па видете како изгледа ако има некоја грешка кажете да поправам....
Dear ________
How wonderful to hear from you. Of course i remember you, although its over 5 years since we last met. From where you know my email address? You asked what i'm doing these days so here's some of my news. First thing is-I finished school and now i study dentistry. You know i love to be dentist. Second- I found real love and its so serious (ova mislam deka nema bash smisla). Now i study in the capital city of Macedonia, Skopje. Here its so beautiful. I know you are busy but i'd love you to visit me soon and meet my girlfriend. She realy want to meet you, my best friend. I can't wait to hear more of your news, so write very soon.
Love
_______ .
Што мислите?
Лошо...
Прво како правилно и граматички точно би требало да изгледа овој текст (исправките и додавките се со црвено):
Dear ______
How wonderful to hear from you. Of course
I remember you, although it
's
been over 5 years since we last met.
How do you know my email address? You asked
me what
I'm doing these days so here
are some of my news.
Firstly, I
'm finished
with school and now
I'm study
ing dentistry. You know
I'd love to be
a dentist. Second
ly, I found
my real love and it
's (поарно наместо "it
's" да стои "I'm so") serious (
about her). Now
I'm study
ing in the capital city of Macedonia, Skopje. It
's so beautiful here. I know you are busy
, but
I'd love you to visit me soon and meet my girlfriend. She would real
ly
like to meet you, my best friend. I can't wait to hear more news
from you, so
please write soon.
Love
,
______.
Второ, малку е ептен детски ова и ептен е измислица.
Прво "му" кажуваш дека "да, се сеќавам на тебе", што значи дека одамна не си имал контакт со него и плус се чудиш од кај нашол твој меил, а после да кажеш дека ти е "најдобриот пријател што девојка ти сака да го запознае"..?!?
Нема смисла.
Ајде малку поработи на случајот.
